In a world where things went right—
Pictures hang from the nails in the wall.
The furniture settles in the carpet indentations.
Clothes dangle from hangars in the other closet.
Two pillows line the head of the bed.
Murphy's Law does not apply.
Books occupy more than half of the shelves.
Boxes remain unconstructed in the garage.
One less key resides in a kitchen drawer.
Words reciprocate one another.
1 comments:
The images you offer are quite evocative. What stands out the most is your use of inactive active verbs: hang, settles, dangle, line, occupy, unconstructed, resides. I like that the final verb doesn't particularly align with the rest, and I must say that, despite the inactivity of the still images offered, I get a sense of great activity just outside the picture frame.
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