Monday, November 1, 2010

Awakening

Today is the day
First of the rest of my life
Cannot fail this time.

2 comments:

Peter Chung said...

I'm back! :D

Edward Yoo said...

You set this haiku up in an interesting manner. Although there is optimism in the speaker, the eyes to the future are reverted to the past in the final line. By ending in this manner. I almost get the sense that the past is still a mountain to overcome.