Going along with my Akira Kurosawa and Christopher Nolan poems. This one, on David Mamet, is actually a slight revision of an older poem: I can't seem to get the fourth line right. Maybe I need to draw the idea out. I don't know.
For the next five weeks, I'm going to take Fridays off, along with the weekend. If I'm inspired to write, and I'm not too lazy or tired to blog, then I may still be around though. We'll see: I just wanted to keep y'all informed.
I like this poem. My only suggestion is if you intend to draw this idea out, I think you should literally incorporate the f-word and all its derivatives into this poem.
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Going along with my Akira Kurosawa and Christopher Nolan poems. This one, on David Mamet, is actually a slight revision of an older poem: I can't seem to get the fourth line right. Maybe I need to draw the idea out. I don't know.
For the next five weeks, I'm going to take Fridays off, along with the weekend. If I'm inspired to write, and I'm not too lazy or tired to blog, then I may still be around though. We'll see: I just wanted to keep y'all informed.
I like this poem. My only suggestion is if you intend to draw this idea out, I think you should literally incorporate the f-word and all its derivatives into this poem.
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