Dude, are you guys tapping into my thoughts? I have a similar idea that's rattling in my head about having dinner with happiness. I'll probably post it tomorrow.
Anyway, I agree with Chris in that this is well-played. The last two lines are particularly clever and I don't think you'd find a poet who would disagree.
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Edward,
You've got poets all wrong man. They're all well-rounded, nonalcoholic, self-loving pedestrians.
...and they're liars. This is well-played
Dude, are you guys tapping into my thoughts? I have a similar idea that's rattling in my head about having dinner with happiness. I'll probably post it tomorrow.
Anyway, I agree with Chris in that this is well-played. The last two lines are particularly clever and I don't think you'd find a poet who would disagree.
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