The dark smoke has cleared
Finally confronted fears
Spilled blood and shed tears
Looking back at life
Both good and bad memories
Yearning sanity
Glance to the future
No more believing rumors
Become the ruler
My life has been good
Even when misunderstood
Done all that I could
2 comments:
I like the idea of clarity and focus here. The notion that this inner fog has lifted and a self-examination has come out of it is particularly nice. I feel like your breaking away from your true rhymes in yuor more recent poems and it shows an adeptness in you, as I feel that you have the ability to write poems that resonate whether they can rhyme or not. It makes me feel slightly one-dimensional.
These were haikus, but with rhyme...I'm not even sure if that's the correct format for haikus...haha.
I appreciate the kind words greatly! My life has gone through some major changes the last few months, and I'm hoping to break free from my norm to find new ways to express myself both in poetry and in life in general.
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