This poem rocks. I like the matter of factness of the first sentence followed by the simile. I like the choice of a simile rather than a metaphor because it still renders the speaker human and creativity is something that separates us from animals. Well done!
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I like the idea, but i'm not in love with this at all.
This poem rocks. I like the matter of factness of the first sentence followed by the simile. I like the choice of a simile rather than a metaphor because it still renders the speaker human and creativity is something that separates us from animals. Well done!
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