Monday, October 18, 2010

all in one

I don't have
many eggs.
I stack them neatly,
encase them in bubblewrap,
toughen up their fragile outsides.
Preparing them for their journey.
If careful
one basket
will do just fine.
Presumed failure
is
failure.

3 comments:

Chris Andrews said...

Don't put all of your eggs in one basket.

Brent Vogelman said...

I like the caution of the speaker as that would be expected since he would value the little that he has. I really like the last line. I never thought of the idiom this way, but saying it really sets up a defeatist attitude. To start something with failure in mind will probably end up in failure.

I was a little confused about toughening up the shells. Does the bubblewrap do that? Or is it something else?
Otherwise, good stuff.

Chris Andrews said...

Yeah, the bublewrap toughens, but I wasn't clear abotu that. I just felt that it needed one more line right there.