Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Survival

September means time to slaughter the pigs. The old sow had bore him many. He fastens her hooves and makes it quick. After, we burn the carcass and scrape the hair. The crackle of pigskin attracts the chickens who come to feed on what we waste, which is always very little. Early that morning I remember the smell of the cold fall rain writing its name in the dust. The water washes her hemorrhage back into the crevices of earth. The ice truck pulls up to the gate; it goes unannounced by the dog, who is too busy to bark, harboring the sow’s ear between his teeth.

4 comments:

Brandi Kary said...

Hi All, I just got back from vacation.
I'm in the process of reworking some of my old stories into vignettes to fit the project I'm doing. Some of the themes may be familiar. I hope you all had an enjoyable summer. I go back to work on Thursday! What happened?

Brent Vogelman said...

I thought summer went by fast as a kid, but at least we enjoy a profession that offers summers off.

This vignette definitely reminds me of one of the short stories that you wrote in Bonca's class. I'm amazed by how you can describe a scene so vividly yet subtly. There's always a line that stands out and "the cold fall rain writing its name in the dust" impresses the hell out of me. I'll never look at rain the same.

Edward Yoo said...

The line Brent points towards is masterful. I don't think I've read the rain ever described as such, yet it works so naturally. Your poems all have this organic means of conveying common ideas in fresh and meaningful ways.

Edward Yoo said...

Hope you enjoyed the vacation, Brandi, as well as your first day of fall instruction.