Monday, August 9, 2010
Escape
I do not fault him for the parts we left inside, for the parts we let out, nor for our barn burning against the blue sky. I think of them in the meadow: mother’s cotton nightgown whipping in the wind, the broken beams of father’s handiwork stirring the night with smoke signals, the field mice escaping like a tidal wave, my brother, a black silhouette, standing in front of his masterpiece like a severed ear.
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Brandi Kary
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This poem reminds me of one of your short stories from the fiction workshop we took part in where the sister leaves her family's slaughterhouse behind in flames (at least from what I remember). The image of the brother staring at the burning barn is beautifully calm in the madness of the scene and his mind. This makes me want to read the events that led up to this escape, but for a snapshot, this is very vivid.
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