The last stanza is excellent and I think encapsulates the feeling of being sick in that these microscopic entities have such a drastic effect on us. I trip up over the first line a little, but for being sick this is pretty good. In that regard, don't feel obligated to contribute here if you're not feeling up to it. I definitely understand.
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I don't feel well today. G'nite...
I hope you feel better.
The last stanza is excellent and I think encapsulates the feeling of being sick in that these microscopic entities have such a drastic effect on us. I trip up over the first line a little, but for being sick this is pretty good. In that regard, don't feel obligated to contribute here if you're not feeling up to it. I definitely understand.
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