Friday, May 14, 2010

When the Acid...

We were halfway to San Fransisco when the acid kicked in.
We had no plan, no objective, there was no agenda.
We arrived just as the sun peaked, the city so vibrant.
We were lost and we didn't care: we were found.

And somewhere in the myriad of bright colors, of aural pleasures,
In the chaos of combustion engines and sentient beings,
In the shadows of architectural marvels and prisms of light,
The world no longer made sense...

I came to several miles from Santa Cruz,
My eyes gazing to the edge of the ocean,
The familiar taste of salt in the air,
The napalm bursts of the engine....

I sat on the cliff for hours,
Listening to everything and nothing,
The cool mist of the sea blessing my feet.
Orange pink and melting, the sun had nearly set.

My eyes drifted down across the beach.
A tribe of natives stared at me,
Spears in their hands,
Pain in their hearts.

Car horns. Screech. Crack. Smash. Breaking glass.
Screams. Yells. Anger. Hatred. Suffering.
I looked over my shoulder as I drifted back,
Pondering the marvels of modern man.

3 comments:

Timothy Wildermuth said...

Appendix:
Ok... So this may or may not be a true story...or a mostly true story. As high as I was, I'm not quite sure. Plus, it happened 16 or so years ago. (Damn I'm getting old.) Peace!

Timothy Wildermuth said...

Appendix B:
This poem is actually untitled. The current title is just a placeholder. Any suggestions? (Or perhaps I should just toss this in the scrapbook or the recycle bin.)

Edward Yoo said...

This definitely should not get tossed in the recycle bin: it's my favorite of your posts thus far, Tim. The images are, in the dreamscape, vivid and felt. I love the intermingling of past and present, technology and nature, construction and destruction.

This poem reminds me of Yamashita's novel, Tropic of Orange, in its deft ability to juggle so many themes into a tightly knit one-ness. Your final two stanzas reminds me of that last battle in her novel, where SUPERNAFTA (technology) and El Gran Mojado (spirituality) vie for supremacy via a WWE smackdown.

Great stuff, Tim! My title suggestion: Where Gods and Titans Lie.