The link between each of your Haikus is remarkable. They could read like a series... I believe there is a specific name for this. In Japan I think one poet starts with writing 4 or 5 haikus and than and another picks up and completes the rest of the chain. ???
Your verb use in all three is so strong for such a little poem. It really signifies the purpose of a Haiku... to have a big impact in compact space.
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The link between each of your Haikus is remarkable. They could read like a series... I believe there is a specific name for this. In Japan I think one poet starts with writing 4 or 5 haikus and than and another picks up and completes the rest of the chain. ???
Your verb use in all three is so strong for such a little poem. It really signifies the purpose of a Haiku... to have a big impact in compact space.
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