Wednesday, May 19, 2010

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.45 caliber,
cardamom, still white lilacs,
whispering Lethe.

3 comments:

Timothy Wildermuth said...

It's a pretty busy day for me, hence the Haiku. (I have a web design class this evening and a ton of work to finish.) I'm looking forward to reading and commenting on all of your poetry later tonight or early tomorrow morning.

I hope today is taking all of you to beautiful places.

Cheers,
Tim

Edward Yoo said...

You've replaced the previous title, "Affair," with the numerical, I've noticed. The start of a collection of thematical interconnected haikus? Did you ever take a class with Dr. Joan Greenwood at CSU? Irena edited a collection of her daily haikus posthumously: some inspiring stuff.

Timothy Wildermuth said...

I did change the title. "Affair," I felt, was too abrupt.

I've been inspired by this form since yesterday, so I am hoping some sort of collection comes from it.

I never had the pleasure of taking a class with Dr. Greenwood...