Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Love Poems

Flesh
cut into words;
Sinewy punctuation
splattered onto
the page
in the ragged
shape of
a heart.

3 comments:

Chris Andrews said...

Haven't written in a while. I've got a few poems in my head though. I am going for brevity here, but it might be a total throwaway.

Chris Andrews said...

After rereading Edward's Love Poem I realize how unintentionally similar they are. I changed this a little

Edward Yoo said...

Haha! I like how both our love poems begin with flesh cutting/slicing. Love is pain.

I'm glad to see a new C.Andrew's poem. I just recently moved (right across the street from CSUF) so I've been preoccupied with that, but I still visit throwaway daily. Will hopefully get something posted soon.