Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Resurrection

He leaned into the plow
forming an acute angle
with the ground.
Every muscle tensed
raising small, hard lumps
in the dough of his arms.

The plow was old, and rusted
but otherwise in good shape.
It was the only thing
that his Grandfather had left him.
It hadn't really been left for him,
but Grandfather had left it
in fallow dirt
like cracked cement, filled with
thorny brown scrub.
And he took it.
Oiled it;
Brought it back To life.

Grandfather had grown
pole beans and okra
on that patch.
He was just a boy then,
but he remembered Grandfather
pushing the plow.
The ground coming up willingly.
Like a child called to supper.

Grandfather's sweat fed crops
beans spread to neon green
spiders along the old wooden fence.
Okra, long spiny spears.
In bushes wider than a man.
A lifetime of Grandfather's sweat;
His essence. Buried deep under
that hard frigid ground.
Waiting to grow again.

The ground relented.
The plow's gnarled brown tooth
dug into the earth.
He'll turn the soil, and his neck will change
from blister-pink
to umber,
and the old man will
be resurrected.
From seed to harvest.

7 comments:

Chris Andrews said...

So I wanted a stillness here, that I think I may have acheived. It's basically an ode to my Grandfather and kind of why I started a garden of my own. I think that the old man would say that hard work is trascendant, and a way to commune with the dead.

Brent Vogelman said...

I like how the poem juxtaposes (haven't used that word in a while) the grandson with the grandfather. Through the grandson's work, we can see the grandfather work too. Also, the pronoun "he" makes it seem like the grandfather is being referred to at times, but still works with this poem.

The last stanza is fantastic and the last line suits the poem perfectly. Well done!

Chris Andrews said...

Thanks, yeah the pronoun is problematic, but I wanted to keep the grandson kind of impersonal so I am not sure what else to do.

Edward Yoo said...

I dig the final line too. This is much wordier than I'm accustomed to for a C. Andrew's poem. It reads almost, dare I say, prosey?

Chris Andrews said...

Yup. I wanted it to be wordier than my other work and prosey too.

Brandi Kary said...

Chris,
I agree about the pronoun, it seems to brake the soft subtle flow of the poem. But overall this poem is fantastic. The images work well together. I'm a fan of poetry that tells stories, and you achieved that in here. well done.

Timothy Wildermuth said...

I love this poem.

The imagery is just amazing.

And the pastoral element you evoke is refreshing and real: we so often take for granted the earth, it's abundance, our relationship to the earth, and how interconnected everyting really is.

A beautiful portrayal of the cyclical nature of life.

Cheers.