The hectic nights spent
On another friend's couch;
The scratchy throat quelled
With a wakeup coughing fit;
The cardboard meals bought
From breaking the cushion bank;
The car engine laughing
With the morning turnover;
The blown speaker sputter
Of the static-spitting stereo;
The weekend work daze
Bridging one hangover to the next;
The late hours lost
In a cloud of smoke;
The desperate call placed
To whomever picked up last week—
Wednesday, September 29, 2010
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3 comments:
I was going in a different direction with this, but in the end it reminds me of my brother.
I totally knew it was about your brother. Very much like your project. I very much like the use of semicolon and the frenetic pace of the punctuation. Also like the alliteration.
What the hell?
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