Friday, July 30, 2010

elements

winter freeze sparks
a quick flicker at dusk
followed by a burst.

nothing burns like the cold.

3 comments:

Edward Yoo said...

This is my Thursday poem: apologies for getting it in passed due. It's another throwaway; I just wanted to get something in. Like Brent, I'll have to comment tomorrow. G'nite poets!

Chris Andrews said...

Not so much a throwaway. I think it's another work in progress. I really like the last line and the sensation it evokes.

Brandi Kary said...

I agree with Chris... not a throwaway and a memorable (and ironic) last line. I'm still admiring your dedication to writing... I managed one last week, let's see what will happen this week.