Monday, June 28, 2010

Treading Souls

We’ve met before—
Past the shorebreak/
Beyond the waves/
Outside the currents
—treading—
The souls of us,
The ghosts of them
Preserved
By tired arms, weary legs
(pseudo-scratching, quasi-clawing)
In uncharted ocean
With no land in sight
—drowning—

We survived together,
Our heads above water
—treading, treading—
Avoiding contact,
As the thrashing of them
Could overtake us
—drowning, drowning—

We waited to inhale
As the rolling surface
Waxed and waned,
Us up, them down
—treading, treading, treading—
Until the tides turned tranquil—
We mustered our strength;
They sustained the struggle:
More storms/more sharks/more sadness
—drowning, drowning, drowning—

And we swam to the vacant horizon;
And they prayed for rescue;
And here we are
Embracing/
Living/
Catching our breaths.

2 comments:

Brent Vogelman said...

The title of this poem shares the same name as the book I will soon write. This poem explains an extended metaphor that will appear throughout the story. I don't know how I would incorporate it (maybe stanza by stanza) if I were to incorporate it at all, but I just wanted to get the idea on paper. Enjoy!

Chris Andrews said...

You removed "thriving" no? I thought that is a little motto of yours. I like thriving. Again, the beauty and certainty of your words, specifically the last stanza (even without thriving) is strong and awesome.