Friday, June 4, 2010

The Process of Suffocation

The colors of our fire deaden to ash.
We've wheezed every last atom of oxygen.
Now begins our suffocation:
our interlocking hands perspire,
loosening the familiar grip of flesh;
our lungs convert claustrophobic trappings
of empty space into unspoken words;
our brains dizzy and waver in reason,
unable to place that first flicker of light;
our hearts beckon for a better world,
greener than the plowed earth we now choke upon;
and the we that existed falls over and dies.

1 comments:

Edward Yoo said...

This is an anti-love poem, made from pieces of old poems and new ideas. On the topic of love, I generally speak in disgusting cliches, as exhibited in the second to last line of this poem. I'm not happy with this, but it's Friday, so it is what it is. Enjoy the weekend all!