This is formulaic, Brent. Do better today. Just kidding, bud.
I like the ideas you present here. It combines two themes I've noticed developing for you and all of us on the blog: schooling and ars poetica. I wonder if you want to broaden outward one more time, and offer an "Each poem--" stanza. I'd also love to see a poem from you on Recess or P.E. in your schooling poems.
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I've hit a wall so this is what I got. I think it's a little formulaic but it'll have to do for today. Enjoy!
This is formulaic, Brent. Do better today. Just kidding, bud.
I like the ideas you present here. It combines two themes I've noticed developing for you and all of us on the blog: schooling and ars poetica. I wonder if you want to broaden outward one more time, and offer an "Each poem--" stanza. I'd also love to see a poem from you on Recess or P.E. in your schooling poems.
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