Thursday, June 3, 2010

Ali

You shook up the world,
And the world shook you back.

There,
You stand, a statue,
In black and white relief,
Shouting at Sonny
—floored/flat-backed/defeated—
Before his lights burnt out.
This defining shot
Wrapped a heavy weight
Around your waist.

With a defiant cross,
You upstaged your ancestry
And championed a new name,
Of a prophet, rightly-guided.

Your fiercest opponent
Dropped bombs from afar,
A war machine without peer.
You took off the gloves
For a fight
You refused to fight
As fights refused you.
This bout went to the scorecard
And the judges raised your arm,
Your title exposed and stripped.

Still undefeated—
You answered the bellow
Of an unbeaten brawler
To reclaim top prize once more.
Under the frenzied lights
Of a sleepless city,
You endured
Your first beating:
A fifteen round suffocation
In Frazier’s smoke.

You fought back,
Leaving home for jungle
And a giant—
A menace unfelled by man.
The natives hailed for blood.
You obliged,
Grilling that Foreman dope
With speed, guile, and ropes—
Your crowning achievement.

Only you,
The Greatest—
Molded from Clay,
Chiseled by faith,
Hardened by dissent—
Could transform
The sweet science
Into poetry.

4 comments:

Brent Vogelman said...

I've been working on this poem for a while after reading Chris' idea about a collection of poems about heroes. Enjoy!

Chris Andrews said...

Edward and I were talking about you yesterday. About how your poetic voice has evolved so far from when you proclaimed yourself a "Prosie". I think this poem is a beautiful exhibition of that. You bring so much beauty and nostalgia to Ali. The 3rd and 4th stanzas are masterful in their subtlety. And the grilling Foreman line is well played. I love the "prophet,rightly-guided" line. You, my friend, are a poet.

Edward Yoo said...

You're definitely an artisan of both crafts, Brent. I still remember My Brother's Father fondly, and have always been curious if you continued to work on the piece. Still, even back in our Tuco days, there was already a strong poet behind the prosie. Sinister and New Goliath have always stuck with me.

Here, you chronicle highlights of Ali's greatness with a rhythm and grace that he would be flattered by. The integration of references, similar to Chris' The Dinosaur and The Turtle Shell, is seamlessly woven into your tribute. The last stanza is masterful too! Great stuff, Brent!

Edward Yoo said...

Like Chris, I dig the Foreman reference, particularly in its allusion to both the Foreman Grill and the Rope-a-Dope technique.