Friday, May 14, 2010

Scents of a Tweaker

I've smoked the stem of a dozen roses,
fakes ones: manufactured
of glass, of cloth, of sweat
from mountainside Chinese factories.

No soft fragrance scents these roses,
they carry the pungent stench of years
spent in a myriad of late nights trimming
fake twenties, stealing junk in unlocked cars,
scrapping off skyscrapers, off stars, off gods,
off supernatural denizens of the night:

all contributors
for that one more hit
that never comes.

2 comments:

Edward Yoo said...

Hi poets. Apologies for my MIA: I've been a bit preoccupied. I've read all your posts and I intend to respond to them over the weekend. Some great stuff! Enjoy the weekend all!

Timothy Wildermuth said...

It took me a minute to understand the roses...Then I realized this was a reference to the little glass tubes.

I think the description of roses is an interesting setup for a poem about addiction and meth in particular.

Also, I get the sense that there is quite a bit of room for expansion if you wanted to revisit and extend this poem.

I really dig the final stanza as it rings true of addiction and is so full of hopelessness.