I like that this conjures up memories of Ireland, but it's subtle. It uses some typical conventions "green-ness", but doesn't beat you over the head with them. I like the "clan together" line too.
This poem rocks! Every stanza holds its own weight and offers an interesting image. I'm curious why you chose the ellipses to end the poem and not a period.
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I like that this conjures up memories of Ireland, but it's subtle. It uses some typical conventions "green-ness", but doesn't beat you over the head with them. I like the "clan together" line too.
This poem rocks! Every stanza holds its own weight and offers an interesting image. I'm curious why you chose the ellipses to end the poem and not a period.
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